Book Review 1-8 The Flying Machine

Nadim, his mum and his dad had been to America for a holiday.Nadim's dad was very nervous. In fact, he didn't like flying. But Nadim liked. On the flight the steward asked him if he would like to see the control. Nadim was very excited!! He had always would like to see the flight deck of an aeroplane. Of course he answerd "Yes, please!" the steward took him through the aeroplane. They went on the flight deck and met the captain. He thaught them a lot of things about aeroplane. Nadim yarned to be a pilot. This was very interesting experience for him. After he got home, he told his friends Biff, Chip and Anneena about his holiday. At the time Mum called Biff and Chip. They were asked to wash up. So, they had to go downstairs. And Anneena picked up the magic key. Then it began to glow. It brought them on an adventure. The magic key brought them to a place in America. And they heard the sound of an engine. The sound was coming out of a big cloud of dust. A man was driving in a strange-looking car. And a strange-looing aeroplane was standing by a barn. they had never seen anything like it. And another man was working on the aeroplane. The two men was twins. They thought that they become the first people to make the flying machine. Immediately, one of the twins Harold sat in the fling machine and the propeller began to turn. But the flying machine didn't work. At this Nadim and Anneena advised a lot of corrections about the flying machine. For example the shape of the propeller. But the flying machine began to rampage. No one could stop the plane. At first the flying machine headed towards a big water tank. After the plane crushed the water tank, the plane roared on towards a farm. In the farm, the twin's mother and father were there. The plane ran through the washing and squashed thier father's melons and pumpkins. Nevertheress the plane didn't stop!! Next the plane headed towards the town. In there, a woman was painting her house. The plane crushed the ladder and knocked it down. At last the plane stopped in the middle of the town. The plane plunged into the statue. The noise was too loud, so people ran to see what the noise was about. At the time there was a noise. It came from up in the sky. An aeroplane was flying. The plane's crew waved and cheered. The man was Wilbur Wright who was one of Wright brothers. They was the first people to fly. After they knowed it, they had an idea for a boat that goes under the water. Thery prpmised Nadim and Anneena to be the first people to make a boat that goes under the water. At the time, the magic key began to glow. Biff and Chip apologized to Nadim and Anneena for waiting so long. But they didn't care at all because they had very interesting experience!! (513 words)